tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7535178324883139663.comments2023-05-23T15:43:00.813+08:00Uneven FloorJacksonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15276717157135843667noreply@blogger.comBlogger91125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7535178324883139663.post-31022402903186227012018-02-22T05:00:05.097+08:002018-02-22T05:00:05.097+08:00EK Holdens and Brown Falcons? Cars, carsEK Holdens and Brown Falcons? Cars, carsLiviohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11149294023876214118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7535178324883139663.post-78970611614345256412017-09-19T22:58:18.000+08:002017-09-19T22:58:18.000+08:00very cool poem...inspired by the line about he wan...very cool poem...inspired by the line about he wants her...wrote a poem inspired by ittimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09084796024340112010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7535178324883139663.post-38035815978621535292017-09-14T23:06:28.359+08:002017-09-14T23:06:28.359+08:00Beautiful, thank you. Beautiful, thank you. Mirandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04632515645968903795noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7535178324883139663.post-55441967967475347992017-09-13T17:18:38.305+08:002017-09-13T17:18:38.305+08:00Lovely thought process to this poem E A M Harris :...Lovely thought process to this poem E A M Harris :Dmsdebbiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16923084286083503306noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7535178324883139663.post-65857724987470308282017-09-13T17:16:32.821+08:002017-09-13T17:16:32.821+08:00Glorious sentiment :DGlorious sentiment :Dmsdebbiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16923084286083503306noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7535178324883139663.post-30826683599045633782017-07-13T08:17:02.688+08:002017-07-13T08:17:02.688+08:00Thank you, Kirsty xThank you, Kirsty xKirstyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03639419302748330873noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7535178324883139663.post-26755433411100859682017-07-13T02:27:19.892+08:002017-07-13T02:27:19.892+08:00I really like the sense of the Australian outback ...I really like the sense of the Australian outback in thisHumaira Saeedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12983242248130108880noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7535178324883139663.post-81164496123724876162017-03-31T08:48:08.137+08:002017-03-31T08:48:08.137+08:00what a fantastic workwhat a fantastic workginnyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03359724549128790340noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7535178324883139663.post-70712482036241581202017-03-07T13:41:54.757+08:002017-03-07T13:41:54.757+08:00and sorry sir the bus is going to be late, hope yo...and sorry sir the bus is going to be late, hope you brought a gun...Jazz27https://www.blogger.com/profile/09831542831425545725noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7535178324883139663.post-68571527579569923902016-11-11T06:25:02.562+08:002016-11-11T06:25:02.562+08:00
He had tears rolling down his face
He said:
‘I’ve...<br />He had tears rolling down his face<br />He said:<br />‘I’ve spent all my money on THE POKIES<br />I’ve stolen off my parents<br />I’ve stolen off my friends<br />I’ve broken into houses<br />I’m dealing to support my LEGAL habit’<br />I should have said:<br />‘You’re really fucked up man’ and got him some help<br />But I said:<br />LETS GO DOWN THE CLUB.Lotuslilyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06141123548031209975noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7535178324883139663.post-33722843199553288502016-11-10T11:44:59.964+08:002016-11-10T11:44:59.964+08:00Poetry is art made out of words :-) ... Ed.Poetry is art made out of words :-) ... Ed.Jacksonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01272444486198172383noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7535178324883139663.post-57947543594167400482016-11-10T11:36:07.533+08:002016-11-10T11:36:07.533+08:00How is this a poem? How is this a poem? Lotuslilyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06141123548031209975noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7535178324883139663.post-30580633625065321522016-10-27T10:46:13.032+08:002016-10-27T10:46:13.032+08:00Simply beautiful.
~BeckieDSimply beautiful. <br />~BeckieDAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06566638356293186925noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7535178324883139663.post-28100984535299987572016-10-13T03:39:58.324+08:002016-10-13T03:39:58.324+08:00Lovely!! I love the last para.Lovely!! I love the last para.JSpirithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18156547453780192421noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7535178324883139663.post-26427578705477449282016-10-13T02:26:56.345+08:002016-10-13T02:26:56.345+08:00Beautiful poems ...Beautiful poems ...Subhashini Koundinyahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13532853216920392687noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7535178324883139663.post-76151909434620039242016-09-30T10:29:40.727+08:002016-09-30T10:29:40.727+08:00This is beautiful. The chest the cave, the heart t...This is beautiful. The chest the cave, the heart the first fire...This is love.Lotuslilyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06141123548031209975noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7535178324883139663.post-47432208671265799612016-09-30T10:22:20.694+08:002016-09-30T10:22:20.694+08:00I too, was caught off guard. And enjoyed it very m...I too, was caught off guard. And enjoyed it very much. Still laughing.Lotuslilyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06141123548031209975noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7535178324883139663.post-48634940510406717772016-09-30T10:16:43.228+08:002016-09-30T10:16:43.228+08:00Delightful. Love it.Delightful. Love it.Lotuslilyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06141123548031209975noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7535178324883139663.post-71407194327272273462016-09-30T10:14:01.588+08:002016-09-30T10:14:01.588+08:00Makes me think of the times I have felt like this;...Makes me think of the times I have felt like this; that things could be different, if I had been better prepared, presented...and hoping for a chance meeting, though knowing it would never come, around, ever again.Lotuslilyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06141123548031209975noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7535178324883139663.post-38788394694041009082016-09-30T10:02:32.675+08:002016-09-30T10:02:32.675+08:00This is heartbreakingly brilliant, with that touch...This is heartbreakingly brilliant, with that touch of humour that can only come from the darkest regions of the human heart. The baby in a white towel makes for a powerful visual of surrender. This is a classic.Lotuslilyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06141123548031209975noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7535178324883139663.post-35722598976419543052016-09-30T09:56:03.589+08:002016-09-30T09:56:03.589+08:00This is brilliant.. Love the way you play with rhy...This is brilliant.. Love the way you play with rhythm. I wanted to keep reading.Lotuslilyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06141123548031209975noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7535178324883139663.post-58195399901218066932016-09-30T09:52:03.219+08:002016-09-30T09:52:03.219+08:00Love this poem. Love it. Love this poem. Love it. Lotuslilyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06141123548031209975noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7535178324883139663.post-30472140818632925792016-09-30T09:40:15.203+08:002016-09-30T09:40:15.203+08:00Beautiful.Beautiful.Lotuslilyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06141123548031209975noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7535178324883139663.post-42787083285716638682016-09-30T09:34:43.584+08:002016-09-30T09:34:43.584+08:00This comment has been removed by the author.Lotuslilyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06141123548031209975noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7535178324883139663.post-15046643147943038222016-09-30T09:30:40.793+08:002016-09-30T09:30:40.793+08:00This is so hard to read. Is it enough just to be g...This is so hard to read. Is it enough just to be grateful to be alive? Lotuslilyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06141123548031209975noreply@blogger.com